cinematography feedback and learner response

student feedback

WWW:

- good acting
- good setting
- good music
- enigma code
- suspenseful 
- good narrative
- variety of shots
- non-diegetic sound
- correct labelling of shots
- good mise-en-scene
- good props
- good costume
- good location 
- good editing
- good POV 
- good tracking shot

EBI:

- plan 
- quality of video 
- use a stabiliser

teacher feedback

WWW:

- shot on feet
- good narrative
- good cinematography
- enigma codes
- tracking shot
- single, effective narrative
- sound track + non-diegetic
- good use of setting

EBI:

- evidence of plan


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