Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

 1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

WWW: Camera movement, visuals match lyrics

EBI: More shots, change typography, editing, lip syncing

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.

WWW: Shots link, good props, camera movement

EBI: More shots, better editing (faster), 

3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

Did not execute to full standard because of the lack of locations and lack of editing and cut up shots.

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

To have multiple locations and to make clips short and snappy instead of long dragging clips.

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.

More locations and more shots on the shot list.

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